Wednesday, 10 September 2014

show don't tell

Her face was as big as a plate. Her face was going to burn on fire. Her arms were shaking, she was just sitting there shaking, she was running like cheetah. her lips like winter, her arms were sweating, she tucked up in a ball. She was think about that someone was walking arms had goose doums  she was thinking that the person walking round in circles like the person was about to kill her in her bed, she was so scared that the person find her tucked in a ball.

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